A reminder, in July,
2002.
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Important Stuff About
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The pieces below were
originally published in the spring of 2002:
A Tip-A-Day for a week
that professional
communicators can adopt,
and offer to others within their
organizations.
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Monday's Tip:
Help your CEO should make three phone calls a week to
the most senior executives reachable at three of your
important customers, just to thank them for the business. Your
job at PR person is to make sure marketing, sales, operations,
etc., brief your CEO on what's up with these particular
customers. And you and the CEO discuss the communications
points to be made during the conversation. By the end of the
year, you'll have improved relationships with 150 customers,
and your CEO will be doing a better job. Friday after lunch is
a good time to schedule these calls.
Tuesday's Tip:
Get your employees involved in your corporate sponsorships.
If you are giving away large amounts of money to a museum,
give free passes to all your employees, too. Sponsoring a tour
by a rock band? Offer a CD from the band, free, to any
employee who requests on. Sponsoring the local theatre
organization? Tickets at a discount for everyone, not just the
executive committee.
Wednesday's Tip:
Turn your media advertising into employee communications and
customer/prospect direct mail. When you launch new ads,
make sure your employees know what you are selling and why.
Put the print ads into your employee paper, and up on both
your internal and external web sites. And, send multiple
copies to all your sales force, for your reps to pass on to
clients and prospects who might (do you think this every
happens?) ... prospects who might miss the ad when it is
published in magazines or newspapers.
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Thursday's Tip:
Good photographs convey the spirit, the imagination, and a
serious load of useful information. Yet PR people hardly
ever use them well, usually skip sending them with news
releases, and fail to set up easy access to good, flattering,
and news-worthy pictures of the CEO and other executive
management. Over the summer, shoot your plants and offices,
visit customers and clients and get useful photos, and have a
variety of portraits taken of the top executives, in fancy
business attire and in more casual clothing. Post some
pictures on your web site in a way that journalists can gain
easy access, too. (Sales pitch: need pictures in Toronto? Call
me at 416 - 879 - 5771)
Friday's Tip:
Make sure the policies that could come back and haunt you
are clear to everyone. Many firms don't have policies on,
for instance, personal use of company computers, (can you load
kids' games on your company laptop that you use at home for
unpaid overtime work?), can you use your office computer for
web surfing for your child's school projects or for ordering
flowers from Martha? Do people understand there a use them or
lose them holiday policy? Your job at PR person is to make
sure that if there are rules, they are understood before
there's a lawsuit or a scandal involved. And if there are not
rules, should there be?
My advice about computers is simple. Put this sentence in
your employee manual. "Computers are like company
telephones; reasonable use for personal purposes is permitted,
as long as job performance is not negatively affected."
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New on Tuesday, January
15,
2002
Attitude adjustments needed for
two ministers to be successful, BAK says
In Canada, we had a cabinet shuffle this morning, with some
ministers being replaced, and others moving on to new jobs. For many of
those who lost their jobs, we can trace their downfalls back to
screwed-up PR. One now-departed minister reported Klan-like cross
burnings that never happened. Another voted in an election in a riding
where she was not allowed. Others alienated all their stakeholders
through confrontation rather than negotiation. There's one that many of
us feel was a corrupt liar; that's certainly what the headlines in the
Globe and Mail say.
Two of the "new" ministers (one current minister got
shuffled to a new job, one non-minister got to be a full cabinet
minister for the first time) are from Toronto, and more or less
represent where I live. Bill Graham, new Foreign Affairs Minister, is
from Rosedale, where I used to live, and Allan Rock, Industry Minister,
is from Etobicoke, where I was raised and which is just across the river
from me, two minutes away.
Here's my unsolicited but nonetheless valuable advice to them:
Allan Rock, Industry: Mr. Rock, put aside your litigation
lawyer-bred instinct to fight and challenge and argue, and instead act
like the deal-maker lawyers who can always find something good for
everyone in a business transaction.
Now your job is to get people to cooperate, not to capitulate; to
expand rather than contract. You can still behave like a lawyer, but it
has to be the deal-making kind who gets the deals done to everyone's
satisfaction. Quit attacking, and quit making us parse everything you
say to find the narrow, legalistic, meanings. Be open and honest and
forthright.
Bill Graham, Foreign Affairs: Mr. Graham, remember to
keep Canadians up to speed on what's going on outside our country. When
I lived in your riding a few years ago, I thought you'd retired and told
no-one. As Foreign Minister, you've of course got an obligation to be
much more visible outside Canada, but I'm recommending you take a high
profile inside Canada, keeping all of us up to speed on what Canada is
doing in the rest of the world. Your most important audience isn't
foreigners, it's us.
And, for both of you: Remember that the first two Ws of
WWW.SomethingOrOther stand for World-Wide, and make sure Canada, (and
Canadian businesses, Mr. Rock) develop and promote web sites that cause
people all over the world to take actions to the benefit of our
country and our citizens. We don't have to spend the billions Mr. Tobin
wanted; we just have to get decent content aimed internationally.
New on Sunday, January 13,
2002
Your staff is blind -- Why Toys
"R" Us is in trouble.
We were at a giant Toys
"R" Us store adjacent to a giant shopping center, in a
prosperous section of the biggest city in Canada yesterday, and the
store was a dump.
You've read where Toys "R"
Us is struggling to get back into prosperous shape. (Stock closed
Friday at $19.63, and the 52 week high was around $31.) Well, when we
walked to the entrance, my wife remarked on all the garbage outside.
Inside the front entrance, there was just as much garbage, illuminated
by dim lights casting bluish gloom on the empty bottles, gum wrappers,
fast food packaging and other garbage that the staff and manager of the
store simply did not see, because they are blind. Visiting buyers and
other executives never noticed the lousy, unwelcoming light either,
because they too are blind. Inside the store, the light changes, to
glare. One mom walked by me, talking to her baby about how bright it
was, with her hand over the baby's face, sheltering the tiny kid's eyes
from the glare.
The staff never noticed the Bionicles
display was almost empty, either.
We were at this store after leaving a
giant No Frills grocery store, where the blind manager, and his
or her blind staff, failed to notice that shopping carts had closed off
two complete lanes through the parking lot. At No Frills, you need
to plug your cart into another cart, in order to get your 25 cent cart
fee back. So everyone takes their carts to the corrals, and the lines
now run into the traffic lanes. The No Frills staff don't bother taking
them back to the store.
Who else is blind? All the store-level
reps selling digital cameras to my neighborhood Future Shop, all the
staff and the management at this Future Shop. This is a giant
Canada-wide chain of computer / stereo / consumer electronics stores
just bought by Best Buy. I wrote about their lousy displays in CEBiz (see
here). Compaq management and Staples Business Depot staff
and management are blind, or they would actually make the Compaq
computer displays at Staples stores attractive. At my local Business
Depot, the notebootes are on a dark shelf, almost always with the wrong
info-tags beside them.
My nearest car dealership is run by
blind people, who never noticed the same "specials" sign
was up for more than a year, with the same cars, at the same prices,
month after month.
Dell's run by blind people. So is Ford
and General Motors and IBM. How do I know.? Anyone who can see
realizes that copy in their ads is unreadable, and unreadable copy is
useless copy.
PR LESSON?
Your colleagues at your place of employment can't see what's going on,
so it is up to you to visit your stores, your branches, your offices,
and do their seeing for them. It's not just bad displays and terrible
housekeeping; "see" how they talk to their colleagues, run
their meetings, conduct their business.
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Below the
line: articles originally from 2001
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New on Wednesday,
December 26, 20001
A
GREAT PR PHOTO: On the Blarp web
site, at http://blarp.com there's a link
in the lower right called "Our Navy At Work" with a great PR
photograph. The site's run by Tom Geldner, and he says "We
just received this photo from a friend who works in the Pentagon. It's
worth a click (80K). Really" He's telling the truth when he
says "Really." I'm surprised I have not see the shot
elsewhere. Click on "It's worth a click" above and you should
see the shot.
Articles from the past are below
....
Four
things business communicators need to know
The other
night I was sitting in a Starbucks reading the paper when a young
woman sat down near me, and started studying. Being a curious soul,
I peeked at the text book title,. Hard to see completely in the dim
light, but it had to do with business communications.
I moved further away a few minutes later (an easy chair beats a
hard café chair) and got thinking about what she really needs to
know.
So I wrote down the four most important things in business
communications, meaning to give them to her before she left. But I
was drawn into my newspaper, and when I looked up, she was gone. My
suspicion is she was a night school student at the University of
Toronto.
But, in case she's reading this, or for anyone else who's
interested…
The
Four Most Important Things a Business Communicator Needs to Know
1/ e-mail is a menace. Do not trust it with important
information.
2/ Leave the room if you can't read the slides.
3/ If there's no agenda for the meeting, delivered a
reasonable time in advance, skip the meeting.
4 Notwithstanding #1, only one topic per e-mail.
Once you grasp these concepts and, to use a buzz-word I sort of
like, once you "internalize" them, you'll be well on your
way to improving business communications within your organization.
I'll expand on this message soon, I expect, but bright people can
just read this, and start thinking. If you're bright enough, you'll
see what I'm getting at, and you'll work to drastically change
behaviors in your organization, if it is anything like most places.
Me? I'm going to the park with my wife and son instead of writing
more on a sunny Sunday afternoon.
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Tuesday, October 16, 2001
| Important stuff about
speeches. |
| Just click
here to jump to a couple of pieces about speeches. Just in case
you ever get to be the chief elected Queen of the Public Relations
Society of America, and get invited to speak to the Economic Club of
Detroit.
I've put this reminder about earlier things I've written here after
learning today that the president of the Public Relations Society of
America, one Kathleen Larey Lewton, spoke to the Economic Club of
Detroit yesterday, but was so lazy and irresponsible that she didn't
bother providing notes for the PRSA web site, nor did she take
advantage of the opportunity to issue news releases and be interviewed
by the Detroit Free Press.
Why am I annoyed, you ask. I'm on a campaign, somewhat
unsuccessfully, to get the people who run communications organizations
to take actions designed to make the profession more respected and
better understood by our employers and clients. I want the
"leaders" to do the same things leaders of other
associations (and businesses and other organizations) do to build
respect and understanding, leading to actions to our benefit,
that we ourselves do on behalf of our own clients and employers. |
Thursday, July 5, 2001
HOW TO BECOME A BIG NAME MAGAZINE WRITER
By Brian A. Kilgore
Here's a condensation of a message posted in CompuServe's MediaPro forum,
for and about journalists and public relations people. It got me thinking
about fame, and so here's my response to Martha.
Hello all:
I've heard more than one magazine editor speak of "big name
writers." I can see how you become one by writing a best-selling
book. But what do you think makes a "big name writer" in the
magazine writing world?
Martha
One way of telling whether someone is a big name writer is to look at the
actual size, and position, of the name. The same thing happens with book
authors.
To start off in their book-writing careers, the title of the book is
usually bigger than the name of the author. Then name and title are both the
same size, and finally, the name of the author is bigger than the title of
the book.
In the magazine world, when the cover of a magazine says "P.J.
O'Rourke goes to Thailand" you've seen a big name writer's fame
translated into potential magazine sales.
When you see "Caitlin Kelly sees Hong Kong from the Crowsnest"
you know a big name author took a trip on a sailing vessel. (I look forward
to seeing this cover blurb some day.)
How do you get to be a big name magazine writer? Three ways, at least.
It helps to be a good writer, since the people writing about you
in newspapers and other magazines, and talking about you on radio and TV,
are usually writers themselves, and won't make a lousy writer famous if they
can help it. It's hard enough for them to get motivated to write about good
writers.
It helps to insert yourself into your stories, so readers are
conscious of the author as they read, and so they learn enough about the
writer, as well as the topic, that they want to come back to other articles,
and learn even more about the writer (in addition to, perhaps or perhaps
not, the original subject.)
And a good personal public relations program helps, whether formal
or informal.
There are all kinds of "tricks" authors can do in the personal
PR line. If the authors send great photos of themselves to their editors
when the story is sent, maybe their pictures will run beside the articles.
One step to fame.
Or maybe they'll drop postcards to their editors from places where they
are writing other stories; the kind of card that nudges one writer's
personal story into the "contributors" column while other writers
are left ignored.
Television, as much as paper-based writers might sneer, makes people
famous. When I'm on TV, people call to say they saw me. W hen I'm in the
paper, people rarely call, butr I get clippings I can mail to people who
missed the article. Can't do that as easily with TV tapes.
So push editors into sanctioning a media relations program to push the
article you wrote, even if only in one city. And even if you run the
campaign yourself, instead of having the magazine do it.
Got a story in Esquire about shoes? Borrow some of the shoes and take
them to your local television station's "Our Town" program, get
yourself interviewed, and send a copy of the tape back to the editor at
Esquire. You're on your way to fame, and more than a buck a word.
You can even be away from home working on another story, but if your
words are on the newsstand and you've got some props -- photos will do --
with you, local television in the city you're visiting just may find room
for you.
Imagine the introduction: "I'm no fashion plate, but writer Martha
Curious, in town to write a story about our famous baked pies, has a story
on the newsstands now -- it's in the November Esquire -- that tells a dozen
fascinating stories about shoes. After the break, we'll ask her about why
policemen in Peru wear yellow rubber boots."
That's three ways, but there are more.
I'd even advocate a good web site as a step toward a big name. Get
your articles up on the site, and that month of fame tied to the shoe story
will continue for many months, for those few people who go looking for a WWW
story about shoes. But the number of visits to your web site does not really
matter. The real purpose of the site is really to allow you to mention it in
pitch letters.
Once editors start going to your site (make it look good) to see your
samples after you've sent in a pitch, you will become more and more famous
and your name will grow.
Celebrity is based on exposure as much as quality, in many cases,
but I only want good writers to read this and follow the leads. No
point giving higher per word bucks to poor writers.
When magazine writers hang around with newspaper writers, sometimes the
newspaper writers write positive stories about the magazine writers. Hardly
ever happens the other way around. But maybe you can drop off a few copies
of your magazine at the local press club or the bar closest to the newspaper
office.
If you live in the USA, get on Politically Incorrect, and a couple of
days before the show is broadcast, tell all your actual and prospective
clients. I do not think it is possible to be too non-famous to be invited
onto that show, (have you ever heard of anyone there?) but you probably need
than a couple of articles in Concrete Products Monthly to be welcomed to the
show.
Some more thoughts. I'm in the book publishing business, more or less,
and get involved in decisions about how big to run the author's name on the
cover, and whether the name is above or below the title. And which gets the
bright type color, and which gets the subdued color.
And when I'm in those meetings we also spend time discussing whether the
author's photo is on the front cover, the back cover, or a flap.
As book publishers, we prefer authors famous enough to justify the
back cover. They cost us more but sell more books. The same principle
applies to magazines, except getting your name on the front cover is your
goal. It probably means higher fees, which was Martha's original point, I
think.
Push your editors to send out news releases about your stories to
daily newspapers. You can even write the release yourself if you've got the
soul of a PR writer (Hint: put the interesting stuff at the top.) Once the
magazine's editors take your words and put them on the magazine's
letterhead, you are automatically important enough in their eyes to move up
a notch, at least, on the freelancers pay schedule, regardless of whether
any other media run the release.
And make sure that when they mail the news release they send a photo
of you and those shoes and not just the shoe shot by itself.
Which means, by the way, stick around to meet the photographer who is
going to illustrate your story. Make sure there's a photo taken of you plus
the location, props, subjects, etc., in addition to the assigned pictures
without you intended that are intended for publication.
If you look good enough in those shots, the editor may even pick a
shot showing you, the writer with the rapidly growing name, to run in
the magazine.
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Monday,
May 7: Click here for Principles of
Advertising
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HAVE YOU BEEN THINKING ABOUT
BROADBAND?
Here's a primer on broadband, aimed at public relations
professionals. |
When
you design, or boss the design of, your web site, do you have
broadband statistics at hand? You need them. Honest. Read on,
please.
Broadband refers in general terms to high-speed
internet connections, much faster than the dial-up telephone links
at 56K. Medium and large businesses are connected to the
internet in various ways at high speeds, and as PR people you
can be pretty sure that people looking at your web site from
their computers at work are doing so with high speed connections.
You don't care about the teckie terms at businesses.
Residential (and small business) high speed broadband
connections are either through television cable, regular telephone
lines that have been specially treated back in the telephone company
offices, or some through-the-air microwave systems.
In North America, the leading cable-based system ends
in the words "@home" and include excite@home,
shaw@home, rogers@home
and a few others.
The telephone wire systems are referred to as DSL or
some other combinations of letters with DSL in them. DSL stands for
Digital Subscriber Line.
For both cable and DS, you do not need special wiring
inside your home or office, but the cable company or the telephone
company needs to put special electronics into their offices, and with
DSL the distance from telephone company office to customer's computer
makes a difference.
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But
both the telephone company and the cable company may or may not need
to upgrade the wires between their offices and the outside of your
home or small office.
For the microwave systems, you'll need a dish on your
home or office, pointed at a dish owned by the microwave company.
While this may sound like an easy ssytem, it is the least popular, for
a mix of technical and business reasons.
Above is all the technical stuff you need to know. But
what is the PR LESSON? If your web
site is going to be used by significant numbers of people at home or
in small businesses, you need to know if they have high speed access
or not, before you design the site.
If they are connecting at 56K,
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Do not run lots of pictures.
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Do not run tedious Flash graphics that contain no
information but take forever to load.
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Do not make your pages so big they take a long
time to load. (I know, I know. BAK's Report's front page is too
big and takes too long to load. I'm trying to figure out how to
revamp it.)
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Do use thumbnails for your photos so people can
look at them small and fast or big, but a bit more slowly.
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Do break your site up into smaller pages, so they
only have to wait for the information they want.
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Do not use graphics (gif files) for your type,
becasue they take to long to load. Instead, just let the reader's
computer pick a typeface.
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Some of the
differences between writing for paper
and writing for the computer screen.
Over in the Compuserve Journalism Forum, a woman wrote that she'd
suddenly found herself teaching a writing course that included web
writing.
What was special about writing for the web, she asked.
People who want in-depth knowledge of web writing can take an
in-depth course from various experts or "experts" as the
case may be. (I'm a touch cynical about some of this stuff.) The
International Association of Business Communicators offers one, (good,
too) and BAK's Report readers can learn about it at www.IABC.com.
Look on the right of the screen for a link to Writing for the Wired
World.
Or you can read
on, for some of my top-of-mind thoughts.
Print journalism is like writing on a roll of paper towels.
You write and write and write, and it is all on one long piece of paper,
even if it turns from page to page in a magazine.
Writing for the web is like writing on big playing cards, which
can be shuffled.
You start the story on one card, and then write the history on another.
A third, fourth and fifth card each have a profile of one leader.
Another card has information on a competitor. And another has info on
suppliers.
Depending on which link someone clicks on at the bottom of one card, the
reader jumps to card four, or seven, or three, or.... Therefore, you
need to always assume your readers have not necessarily read what was in
earlier paragraphs, because they may have skipped those links
completely.
Depending on the web site operator, the writer may or may not have more
or less to do with the final visual appearance on the screen than the
writer would in paper-based print.
Line length on computer screens is a big issue; but it may not be
the responsibility of the writer. Bold facing, and italics, and even
the color of the type may or may not be the responsibility of the
writer.
Why? Because I think that in print, even today, there's someone who
has at least a passing grasp of language involved in some sort of
editing function. But over in web-land, it could just as easily be some
computer nerd who would fail grade eight English if the school
system had any standards.
Print has a longer and shorter life, concurrently, than does print.
Once published on paper, print words are there until the magazine or
newspaper is thrown out. Newspapers are usually gone in a day or two.
Magazines stay weeks or months, and clippings even longer.
But, regardless of how long it stays, print stays unchanged.
Web words stay up for days, weeks, or months, meaning you need to
write in a way that is topical three months from now. Sometimes the site
is dead and gone, but the words are archived in some search engine.
Web writing often seems untimed or undated; the reader does not
have a clue if this is last week's story, or last year's, so there a
need for dates, including the year, on individual web pages, or even
stories upon a page. In paper-based publishing, editorial work usually
has a cover date, although advertising writing and marketing and
brochure writing is often undated, leaving the reader to wonder if this
is the latest version.
Web writing can be updated, even several times a day. With a good
web site, some stories never seem to be finished because as the
inspiration of the stories change, the editor puts in updates. But how
many updates are too many? When is it time to start the story over
again? That's a problem I face in BAK's Report. Usually I start over
again when I think there are too many other stories between the top of
the page and the story I'm updating. It's just too far to scroll to get
to the update or the update.
The web is like radio and tv, but only sometimes, and only in some
ways. What this means is that, depending on the web site navigation
scheme, you may start at the top and have to proceed in some order
determined by the editor and not the readers. If navigation is set up
well, however, it is also like newspapers, because you can jump from
story to story, skipping the ones you don't want to consume. With
radio and tv, you have to listen to the sports in order to get to the
weather. So you need to be patient.
With the web, you have to wait for every story to arrive on your screen,
especially if there are photographs. It's like buying a magazine with
the pages stuck together. So there had better be good head-ins, to
justify waiting for the pages to load and the pictures to completely
fill the screen.
Bad web designers (go look at the Alta Vista Canada home page) fail
to understand the concept of a complete phrase. They run part of a
headline, but not enough for you to make a go / no go decision, so, if
you are curious, you waste time waiting for a link to activate and a
story to come up. An example? As I type, Alta Vista Canada offer
"Alliance strategy to focus less on …" Less on what? Tell
me, and I might go there. Don't tell me, and I skip it.
People do not read carefully on screen, most of the time. They are
skimmers. In contrast to paper-based articles, it's harder to go
back up a couple of paragraphs to clarify some earlier reference,
because you have to control the scrollbars, instead of just looking up a
couple of inches.
And there are more differences.
That's just all I had time to write.
Mini-update on Monday, March 5, 2001
There
are a few book reviews on their way.
I've just started to read Dan
Middleberg's Winning PR in the Wired World, a McGraw Hill book
that called out to my wife and me as we were walking through The World's
Biggest Book Store late Friday afternoon.
The picture to the left is a pretty
good scan. The book cover really is this ugly. But the content, at least
up to page 3, which is as far as I am so far, looks very good.
Middleberg writes well, with a touch of the cynic / realist to his
words. I think I'm going to enjoy this book.
Also in the "to be reviewed"
stack is Culture.com, by Peg Neuhauser, Ray Bender and Kirk
Stromberg. There's a brief article about this in the UK edition of
Business 2.0, February 2001, on page 159, that ends with these words, "The
book's real strength is in the amount of ground covered. ... making it
an excellent choice for managers in all types of industries." I
do some work for a publishing company, and we'd kill for a line like
that we could use in ads and on book jackets. Peg
Neuhauser is one of the speakers at the IABC conference in New
York in late June. Read the book -- meet the woman!
Also about to be read and
reported on when I find the time, are the three-pack Reinventing Work
series from Tom Peters, consisting of the project 50, the brand
you 50, and the professional service firm 50; The New Positioning
by Jack Trout, with Steve Rivkin, and New Thinking for the New
Millennium, by one of my favorite authors, Edward de Bono
IMPORTANT
STUFF ABOUT SPEECHES
New on Tuesday, February 21, 2001 - Updated
Tuesday, October 16, 2001. If you've come to this page because you read
about the Economic Club of Detroit, click
here to jump down just a little bit to where I am rude, and deadly
accurate.
I've been thinking about speeches.
This should be helpful to executives making speeches, and PR people
preparing speeches.
Three Kinds Of Speeches
by Brian A. Kilgore
While listening at lunch yesterday to David Dodge, the new Governor
of the Bank of Canada (Americans can think of him as Alan Greenspan,
north of the border version) I started to think of the three distinctive
categories of speeches.
All too often communicators prepare, and executives deliver, a speech
from the wrong category. I've listened in person
to ten speeches so far this week, and there were examples from each
category. I was lucky. Everyone got the category right.
1/ The policy speech: this establishes some rules, builds a
foundation upon which action is taken, provides clear instructions
about what is to follow.
2/ The inspiration speech: it establishes a mood and gets
people on-side.
3/ The education speech: tells people something they did not
know, provides a map to a destination, establishes the tools and
techniques to accomplish a goal.
A policy speech to an audience that needs to be educated is a waste
of time for speaker and audience. So's providing inspiration when policy
is needed.
All three speech types have several things in common. I call this the
"All List"
All must cause people to take actions to the benefit of the
speaker. Otherwise, why bother making the speech?
All are very important to a small number of people who hear
the speech, not very important to some or even most people, and of
varying degrees of importance to those in between.
All need to be understood immediately, and also be memorable
afterwards.
All should be taken out of the room.
All will be taken outside of the room, even if the
speaker does not plan this.
All will only be able to accomplish a little, so don't be too
optimistic about the impact.
All require effort and discipline.
Here's a little more about each point.
Policy speech.
David Dodge made a policy speech. It's the kind where certain listeners
hang on specific words and phrases. 3% inflation. 3% annualized growth,
lower in the first half and higher in the second. The Americans won't
keep buying 17 million automobiles a year. Exchange rates are an anchor.
It's the policy of the central bank of Canada.
An Alan Greenspan speech is a policy speech, too, although usually
poorly written, leaving commentators asking each other "What did he
say?" Will no one tell him to get a better writer?
Most corporate annual meeting speeches are policy speeches, and a
few, but only a few, political speeches are policy speeches.
The speakers can control the fact that a policy speech is a policy
speech, but they may not be able to control whether an inspiration
speech or an education speech turns into a policy speech. Here's an
example.
Right now the University of Toronto Law School is trying to find
out whether an inspirational speech by a law faculty member telling
students to lie about their marks when applying for summer jobs
turned, presumably by accident, into a policy speech. All we know as I
write this is that about 30 students apparently lied about their
Christmas marks, and some are saying their teacher told them to.
Inspiration speech.
On Monday night I was at a fund-raiser for Beatrice House. Depending on
when and where you read this, you may be able to find more of Beatrice
House by going to a search engine and looking for The Founders Network.
One of the speakers was a graduate of the program, and she spent a
few minutes reading the "letter from the future" she wrote
when, as a homeless mother, she first came to Beatrice House. The letter
talked about how she had moved to Seattle, bought a two bedroom house
beside a lake, become a therapist herself, and had started her own
business. Her speech was interrupted by laughter and applause and there
were some teary eyes. I'm prepared to believe that her speech
inspired more in the way of contributions than any of the other eight
speeches that evening.
The inspiration speech is the one to give to employees when things
are going well, and its even more important to give this
speech when things start to go badly. It's the one politicians
give within the party, to get the workers to plant just ten more lawn
signs before they go home, knock on a dozen more doors, make four more
fund-raising phone calls before they call it a night.
Education speech.
And the education speech may inspire too, but what sets it apart is that
it either tells the audience how to do whatever it is you want them to
do, or explains to them how something works, so that they can be
confident the efforts they make (again, because you want them to do
something) will not be wasted.
At the Beatrice House reception on Monday night, there were two good,
but different, education speeches. Dr. Fraser Mustard, one of the
founders, explained how his organization goes about helping homeless
mothers, who the supporters are, mentioning many by name, drawing the
audience's attention to individuals among them, and laying out the
Beatrice House program. The result was an educational speech that
reassured everyone present that their donation would be carefully and
efficiently and effectively spent, under the guidance of responsible
people. The lesson? You can donate with confidence -- your money
won't be wasted.
And the educational speech that took itself out of the room
came from Bill Humphries, who reminded the audience that this was, after
all, a fundraising event. In the course of his three minutes he taught
several lessons, but the most important was that the children in the
pictures on display around the room could have been the prosperous,
successful, fulfilled people in the audience, except for the luck of the
lottery of life. And that the board members would phone everyone in the
room. And they would ask for money when they phoned, so please take the
donor kits and give them to your contribution and donation committees. (Effectively
taking the speech out of the room and into the donations committee
meeting.) The audience left with knowledge; they would be called and
they had better be prepared with a decision. There could be no excuses.
In a corporation, education speeches should be the stock in trade
of executives speaking at conventions, conferences, trade shows and most
events with primarily external audiences. And it's the educational
speech, and not the inspirational speech, that's needed when there's big
change in a company. People need to know what they should do to make the
"new" Ajax Widgets a success. They don't need inspiration
about how to deal with the change. They need instructions on how to act.
There's overlap, of course, among the three types. Once you know
what the company, or department, or government agency expects (policy)
and know what you must do to makes these policies become reality
(education) it's the inspirational part of the talk that will get you
doing it.
Let's look at the "All" list
All must cause people to take actions to the benefit of the
speaker. Otherwise, why bother making the speech?
I spend way too much time in audiences listening to
speeches with no call to action for anyone, and I always wonder what
useful thing could the speaker be doing, instead of droning on from
behind the lectern. (I left the (relatively few) lousy presentations out
of my IABC Next Wave and Conference Board conference coverage elsewhere
in BAK's Report. But there was still a lot of wasted time. Honest.)
Most people say they do not have enough time in their lives.
So, if you are the speaker, what possible reason is there to prepare
a good speech, go the location and stand up for 20 minutes or an hour,
if there's no payoff for you? It's just stupid.
It also insults the audience.
If the speech does not cause them to do something new, or different,
or important, they just wasted their time coming. Maybe the lunch was
good (The Dodge lunch was fine, chicken and rice at the Toronto Board of
Trade, but puzzling to me was the absence of bread and butter plates,
and it was a good policy speech, with education undertones. And it
inspired this paper.)
All are very important to a small number of people who hear the
speech, not very important to some or even most people, and of varying
degrees of importance to those in between.
You may be willing to go speak to the Chamber of
Commerce, because in the audience will be your four best prospects for
major sales, plus the regulator who will approve, or refuse to approve,
some bureaucratic rules you need altered. Of the other 226 other people
in the room, nine are existing customers, three are your regional sales
representatives, and four are suppliers. You want them all to do
something too, but none of it is as important to you as getting a
positive decision from those first four prospects.
And everyone else? They don't really matter, do they, except that you
don't want to insult them, and out of common courtesy, you don't want to
bore them?
Make sure that each time you speak (or if you're a PR pro, manage
someone else's speech) you do invite the audience members you want to
inspire, educate, or have agree on policy. You want to stack the
audience in your favor. Invite prospects to hear you speak and you'll be
amazed how many will come.
All need to be understood immediately, and also be memorable
afterwards.
I keep hearing speeches that I can't understand, simply
because they were not written by anyone knowledgeable about writing for
the ear. The phrases don't flow.
Don't use jargon and don't use abbreviations and don't use
psychobabble and don't use phrases generated at http://www.dack.com/web/bullshit.html
Leave out most of the statistics. Leave out most of the history.
Think what the sound clip would be. When the speech is over,
if you asked audience member's "What did I say that was important
to you?" make sure the audience member can remember something you
want remembered.
Dodge said Americans won't keep buying 17 million cars, and that quip
made the papers today, but I don't think that was the message he wanted
to leave. I suspect the car companies are a bit annoyed. Bill Humphries,
at the Beatrice House event, said a board member would call. I'll bet
that was remembered. Now the audience members are waiting for the call,
and, we hope, have their cheques ready.
All should be taken out of the room.
(Note the "should" in italics.) What
you say in the room may be important to those people, but there are
dozens, hundreds, thousands more people outside the room who would
probably take actions to your benefit if they actually knew what you had
said. Get your speech out of the room, via media, via your web site,
via your sales reps, via the postal system.
Leave copies at the back of the room, so that the audience can take a
copy back to share with a colleague.
Fourth rate PR people do not invite the media to the speech,
and if reporters do show up, don't have a copy to the speech to give the
reporter.
Third rate PR people don't bother posting the speech on the
company web site, nor do they send copies to reporters covering the
industry who did not hear the speech in person.
Second rate PR people post the speech on the web site, but
bury it so there's no indication of the speech when a visitor gets to
the opening page of the site. No, wait a minute. They're third rate PR
people, too.
Second rate PR people post the speech, flag it on the opening
page, but don't bother sending copies to clients, customers, suppliers,
regulators, reporters, etc. They don't even send e-mails saying the
speech is on the web.
First rate PR people invite the media to cover the speech;
underline the best parts and give it to technicians so that the news
cameras and radio microphones are turned on when the speaker says the
words you want to appear on television and radio; send the speech to
reporters who don't show up; extract the highlights of the speech and
put them in a news release; publish both the highlights and the entire
speech on the web site, with an opening page flag; send the release and
the speech both (because they know most people won't read the whole
text, but will read the release) to customers, prospects, suppliers,
industry leaders, state, provincial, municipal and federal politicians
and civil servants, and sometimes even competitors. They hold a news
conference immediately before or after the speech.
They also send the speech in some form or other to the most important
audience; employees.
All will be taken outside of the room, even if the speaker
does not plan this.
(See "all" in italics?) And someone in the audience
will take the interesting bits of the speech out of the room anyway, and
spread the word, whether you want them to or not. Two hours before
starting to write this I was reading about an American diplomat based in
Hong Kong, Michael Klosson, who managed, in a speech he gave in Texas,
to seriously annoy the Chinese government. Back in Hong Kong, officials
of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs called comments in the Texas speech
"totally inappropriate " and "irresponsible."
Maybe that was his plan. Maybe not. Probably not. But anyway,
the comments went around the world.
All will only be able to accomplish a little, so don't be too
optimistic about the impact.
Speakers think people are paying attention. Mostly, they are not, even
with the good speeches. And the audience promptly forgets.
A speech is like an ad. Advertisers who spend millions of dollars on
publishing or broadcasting their ads would be happy to run the ad only
once, if it made a really great impact. But once doesn't work. Advertisers
know this, and good PR people know this.
Speakers need to be told this too, and then sent out to make the same
points over and over, to audience after audience, month after month,
community after community, and even country after country.
All require effort and discipline.
No speech is easy, yet amateurs think it is. I watched last week as the
creation of three minutes of comments by one speaker took three hours of
writing by professionals even before the words were given to the speaker
for his review. He changed some.
I've written some speeches for very, very good lawyers. You might
think this would be quick, because they're used to being on their feet,
speaking in front of very smart people. The reverse is true. Because
lawyers know the value of words, they want to make sure exactly the
right word is chosen, and it is in exactly the right context.
Perhaps the greatest honor I've received for speech writing
was a comment from a former Justice of the Supreme Court, who, upon
reviewing words I'd written for him said, "Thank you, these are
fine," and went on to speak them on national television.
The best speakers I've worked with rehearse, and practice, and change
and alter and modify, and then practice again, before they present.
It pays off, because, although I did not list it in the original
"all" list, there's one more "all."
All speeches are showbiz. Don't forget this. Get
the right costume, and good writers, and a director, and rehearse and
rehearse and rehearse.
Published Labor Day Weekend, 2000
-- Easy-Print version
A BAK's Report advisory for
Chief Executive Officers and other senior executives who need to make
speeches that inspire.
Nine tips for ensuring the quality of your speech
1/ Start hard and fast, like a great movie. No history, no
recapping, no setting the scene.
Take the machine gun, climb out of the cockpit, crawl along the wing,
and jump into the passing helicopter.
"Thanks Bob, good afternoon – Ladies and gentlemen, get
ready for the ride of your life, because next year we’re cutting
turnover 25 %, we’re doubling the number of people we’re going to
recruit, and we’re going to integrate our national operations with
the rest of North America.
And while we do this, we’re going to become an even greater
place to work! Are you up for it? Let’s go!"
2/ Allow weeks, not days, for the speech to be researched,
written, read over, revamped, vetted by your senior management,
rehearsed, revamped again, rehearsed some more, and presented. This
always takes longer than you think, and your delivery of the speech will
get better.
3/ Eliminate words that do not fall clearly upon the ear. Cut
"these policies are endemic in our organization," and put in
"found throughout the company." Never use a word that starts
with "a" to indicate the opposite of the rest of the word.
Atypical, for instance.
4/ Minimize middlemen. If you are going to be standing on the
stage in front of 400, or 4000, or 40 people worth speaking to, it’s
up to you to make sure the writer is properly briefed and updated, and
always in sync with what you think is important. Not the job of your
underlings.
But remember…
5/ Vetting counts – make your vice-presidents sign off on
the specific facts relating to their areas of responsibilities. Do not
stand on stage and spout the wrong information because the low-level
manager who briefed the speechwriter did not know the latest
departmental managerial strategy. Get the executive management involved.
Incidentally, it takes a lot of time and
effort, on the part of many people, to develop and delivery a great
executive speech.
6/ Respect the professionalism of the speechwriter, and don’t
screw around with the copy. Sure, the facts must be right, and
the tone must be something you’re comfortable with, so you can make
some alterations. It is, after all, you up on the podium with the
spotlight. But deal with the speechwriter yourself at this stage.
Chicken mid-managers will suck the life out of your speech if you give
them half a chance.
And trust the speechwriter to choose the words and the phrasing and
the pacing, and don’t try to change something like "We have three
goals for the next month" to "At this point in time an
analysis of opportunities allows us to delineate several priorities
within the balance of Q3." Readers: you know this is true,
don’t you?
7/ Remember that a speech has its own rules of grammar and style,
designed to be heard and remembered, not read silently/.
The audience can’t backflip – there’s no way for them to stop
listening now and re-hear what you said a few paragraphs ago, the way
they stop on a page, and flip back a page or two to make sure they
understand what is written.
So a speech will have a structure you may be uncomfortable with when
reading it silently to yourself sitting at your desk, but which will
fall clearly upon the ears of your audiences.
Phrases, not sentences.
Words that depend on inflection and tone for their meaning. Repeats
of something you said before.
Want some examples? Use "two thirds" and "about
half," or "the vast majority," instead of 67.9% and 54.7%
and 87.4 percent, because after three or four multi-digital numbers, the
audience gets lost.
Try this if you've got a speech draft handy: Read it, with feeling,
into a portable tape recorder or dictating machine, and play it back.
Does it sound stilted and boring? You'll probably see complete sentences
and good grammar. Fire the speechwriter? Does it sound vibrant and
alive? Then it's written like a good movie script, so hold your next
meeting with the speechwriter over a good, expensive, steak (or tofu, if
appropriate)
8/ Don’t confuse a speech and a presentation.
In a speech, there’s a spotlight shining on you,
the audience looks at you, and you inspire and lead and motivate.
Speeches are what CEOs of major corporations, and presidents and
prime ministers of nations, and executive managers of major divisions,
and winning coaches of sports teams, and genuine gurus of the new and
innovative, make.
In a presentation, you are in the dark, and the audience is
looking at a screen, using much of their brains trying to read the
slides. They barely hear you.
In a well done presentation, you inform and build technical
understanding, but rarely do they inspire. Winston Churchill kept his
Powerpoint slides under his bowler. Abe Lincoln deliberately left the
extension cord in the log cabin, so he had a good excuse to talk without
the computer projector. Abe knew he wanted the audience looking at him,
not some fuzzy slides.
Presentations are for getting budgets approved and selling widgets.
Speeches are for changing the way
people think and act.
9/ Take the speech out of the room. When the CEO or an
executive manager speaks about confidential company issues at a company
function attended by all employees, it’s clear the most important
audience is in the room.
But when a CEO or an executive manager speaks about company issues
that affect shareholders, customers, suppliers, prospects, current and
future employees, regulators and other stakeholders, most of the effort
that went into writing, rehearsing and making the speech goes to waste
if the speech bounces off the walls, but doesn’t rush out the door,
too.
If it’s a company function but only a few employees can be present,
send copies of the speech to everyone absent. Get the speech up on the
web site, and put the highlights into a news release.
Underline the points most important to various types of stakeholders,
and mail copies to them. Include the CEOs, in addition to the day to day
contacts, at your largest and your highest potential clients and
customers. Give copies to your sales reps, to drop off on their rounds.
Let your suppliers know how you are transforming your team.
Even have copies of your speaking notes in piles by the door, so your
audience can take your information with them, and share it with others.
New on Sunday, February 18, 2001
Just a rhetorical question.
You can catch on to why it is important.
Regardless of whether you are a CEO, an executive
manager, or a professional communicator, how many
customers have you talked with, in person, this year? (When
I wrote this I was thinking about how well the executive management of
Nortel, and the public relations management, knows its customers.)
Was the number of customers you
visited enough?
Enough said. Decide for yourself if you need to
change some priorities and get out more.
New on Wednesday, February 14, 2001
This article ran in the Globe and Mail
newspaper on Monday, February 12, 2001
Asia is going it alone
APEC, in which Canada has been an active member, may be
on its last legs, says international lawyer TIM ARMSTRONG.
It's a consummation devoutly to be wished
TIM ARMSTRONG
Monday, February 12, 2001
While attention in Canada has been focused on trading relations with
the United States and the rest of the hemisphere, the countries of Asia
have quietly been going about the business of creating the world's
largest trading bloc, one that embraces a third of the world's
population and dwarfs the EU and our own NAFTA.
The initiative gained impetus from three key developments in the past
year. In May, at a meeting in Thailand, the Association of Southeast
Asian Nations agreed to a network of currency swap/repurchase
arrangements, designed to protect member countries against the sudden
withdrawal of "hot money" investment by Western speculators --
the kind of thing that triggered the financial meltdown in Thailand in
1997 and quickly spread to many other Asian jurisdictions. Under the
swap plan, countries are guaranteed short term, hard currency liquidity
by their Asian partners when faced with an exodus of off-shore
investment.
Then, in October, Singapore, Japan and Korea accelerated their
discussions toward bilateral, intra-regional free-trade agreements.
Other countries within the region are rumoured to be considering similar
bilateral arrangements.
Most significantly, the ASEAN group met again in Singapore in late
November and agreed to expedite a feasibility study for an
all-encompassing Asian trading bloc. Japan's Prime Minister Yoshiro Mori
hailed the plan as "epoch-making."
ASEAN was formed in 1967 in the shadow of the Vietnam war and the
perceived threat of communism's spread in South East Asia. The original
members were Indonesia, Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, and the
Philippines. Following the end of hostilities in Indo-China, Vietnam,
Laos, Cambodia, Myanmar (formerly Burma), and Brunei joined. Japan,
China and South Korea later became associates and the group's agenda
became one of safeguarding and promoting the members' economies.
While there will be impediments to establishing this enormous trade
bloc, including the varying stages of development of the countries
within it, none of the difficulties seems insuperable. Judging from the
support among the 13 member nations, the question now seems to be when,
not if, the bloc will become a reality.
Japan's vice-minister for international affairs, Takatoshi Ito,
identified four factors behind the push for regional consolidation:
first, the World Trade Organization's failure in Seattle in 1999 to
advance its agenda for further multilateral trade liberalization;
second, the disillusionment in Asia following the currency crisis in
1997 and 1998, concerning the role of the International Monetary Fund
and its controversial management of the crisis; third, the single market
and currency in Europe and the proliferation of free-trade agreements
beyond Asia, most notably NAFTA; and fourth, the belated recognition of
a natural community of interests among the Asian nations and the need
for permanent institutional arrangements to accommodate them.
Asian leaders were quick to point out that the Asian bloc is not
intended to exclude North America or Europe, nor any other region, but
rather to balance the global trading system by providing a "Made in
Asia" institution to match NAFTA and the EU.
Despite these reassuring statements, the Singapore initiative, when
realized, is bound to have a profound impact on other institutions,
principally on APEC (the Asia-Pacific Economic Co-Operation Forum) and
on the WTO.
APEC, founded in 1987 at the initiative of Australia and Japan and
comprising 21 nations (including four non-Asian members, Canada, the
United States, Australia and New Zealand) has had a checkered history.
At its meeting in Indonesia in 1994, the group committed itself to
multilateral tariff reduction, with 2010 as the target for total tariff
removal by the developed nations, and 2020 by the developing economies.
No visible progress has been made toward these objectives.
Thus, even before the ASEAN meeting in Singapore, APEC had lost any
meaningful momentum, and there has been growing scepticism in Asia about
the inclusion of the non-Asian members. Prime Minister Mahathir Mohamad
of Malaysia sees the United States as a trojan horse, intent upon
manipulating Asian trading relationships according to its own national
interests. Japan's colourful former vice-minister of finance, Eisuke
Sakakibara, adds that for APEC to be a true regional organization it
should not include the United States.
At the last APEC meeting in Brunei, also in November, it was obvious
that the organization was in disarray, had lost its sense of purpose and
that its defenders were desperately attempting to paper over cracks in a
seriously flawed and foundering organization. If the Asian trading bloc
envisaged by ASEAN materializes, it is difficult to see a meaningful
role for APEC.
The impact of an Asian bloc on the WTO, however, is likely to be
positive. With over 130 members and deep divisions within the
organization between the developed and developing nations (to say
nothing of the dissent from external interests) it will be difficult to
kick-start a new round of WTO multilateral talks. But there are
persuasive arguments that a strong, cohesive Asian bloc could
reinvigorate the WTO's multilateral agenda. As Japan's vice-minister Ito
wrote recently, "The task for Asian countries is to ensure that
regionalism in Asia really complements global trading and financial
systems, like other regional arrangements in North America and
Europe."
Canada's interests are surely best served by applauding this new
Asian initiative, and recognizing it as complementary to the objectives
of the WTO.
As to whether Canada should cling to the existing APEC structure, one
is reminded of John Cleese's classic Monty Python episode about the dead
parrot, when, in response to the pet shop vendor's claim that it was
alive, Mr. Cleese exclaimed: "It's bleedin' demised! This is a late
parrot! It's joined the Choir Invisible!"
Tim Armstrong
is counsel to McCarthy Tétrault. He was Ontario's agent-general for the
Asia-Pacific region, and deputy minister of industry, trade and
technology.
New Sunday, February 4, 2001
Media Relations 101 -- for functional managers
This presentation was developed for middle managers who are cleared
to provide media interviews on their own, without a professional
communicator being present. The idea is to get increased coverage of
specialized functional departments. In typical companies, it could
be aimed at coverage of information technology initiatives such
as the introduction of an electronic exchange or a new way of
approaching e-mail; human resources policies such as
recruitment, retention or new benefits; marketing
developments such as a new advertising campaign or pricing policies; or sales
policies such as new channels, introduction of new dealers,
revisions to distribution programs, etc.
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