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Tuesday, October 24
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New Labor Day Weekend, 2000 A BAK's Report advisory for Chief Executive Officers and other senior executives who need to make speeches that inspire. Nine tips for ensuring the quality of your speech 1/ Start hard and fast, like a great movie. No history, no recapping, no setting the scene. Take the machine gun, climb out of the cockpit, crawl along the wing, and jump into the passing helicopter.
2/ Allow weeks, not days, for the speech to be researched, written, read over, revamped, vetted by your senior management, rehearsed, revamped again, rehearsed some more, and presented. This always takes longer than you think, and your delivery of the speech will get better. 3/ Eliminate words that do not fall clearly upon the ear. Cut "these policies are endemic in our organization," and put in "found throughout the company." Never use a word that starts with "a" to indicate the opposite of the rest of the word. Atypical, for instance. 4/ Minimize middlemen. If you are going to be standing on the stage in front of 400, or 4000, or 40 people worth speaking to, it’s up to you to make sure the writer is properly briefed and updated, and always in sync with what you think is important. Not the job of your underlings. But remember… 5/ Vetting counts – make your vice-presidents sign off on the specific facts relating to their areas of responsibilities. Do not stand on stage and spout the wrong information because the low-level manager who briefed the speechwriter did not know the latest departmental managerial strategy. Get the executive management involved.
6/ Respect the professionalism of the speechwriter, and don’t screw around with the copy. Sure, the facts must be right, and the tone must be something you’re comfortable with, so you can make some alterations. It is, afterall, you up on the podium with the spotlight. But deal with the speechwriter yourself at this stage. Chicken mid-managers will suck the life out of your speech if you give them half a chance. And trust the speechwriter to choose the words and the phrasing and the pacing, and don’t try to change something like "We have three goals for the next month" to "At this point in time an analysis of opportunities allows us to delineate several priorities within the balance of Q3." Readers: you know this is true, don’t you? 7/ Remember that a speech has its own rules of grammar and style, designed to be heard and remembered, not read silently/. The audience can’t backflip – there’s no way for them to stop listening now and re-hear what you said a few paragraphs ago, the way they stop on a page, and flip back a page or two to make sure they understand what is written. So a speech will have a structure you may be uncomfortable with when reading it silently to yourself sitting at your desk, but which will fall clearly upon the ears of your audiences. Phrases, not sentences. Words that depend on inflection and tone for their meaning. Repeats of something you said before. Want some examples? Use "two thirds" and "about half," or "the vast majority," instead of 67.9% and 54.7% and 87.4 percent, because after three or four multi-digital numbers, the audience gets lost. Try this if you've got a speech draft handy: Read it, with feeling, into a portable tape recorder or dictating machine, and play it back. Does it sound stilted and boring? You'll probably see complete sentences and good grammar. Fire the speechwriter? Does it sound vibrant and alive? Then it's written like a good movie script, so hold your next meeting with the speechwriter over a good, expensive, steak (or tofu, if appropriate) 8/ Don’t confuse a speech and a presentation. In a speech, there’s a spotlight shining on you, the audience looks at you, and you inspire and lead and motivate. Speeches are what CEOs of major corporations, and presidents and prime ministers of nations, and executive managers of major divisions, and winning coaches of sports teams, and genuine gurus of the new and innovative, make. In a presentation, you are in the dark, and the audience is looking at a screen, using much of their brains trying to read the slides. They barely hear you. In a well done presentation, you inform and build technical understanding, but rarely do they inspire. Winston Churchill kept his Powerpoint slides under his bowler. Abe Lincoln deliberately left the extension cord in the log cabin, so he had a good excuse to talk without the computer projector. Abe knew he wanted the audience looking at him, not some fuzzy slides. Presentations are for getting budgets approved and selling widgets. Speeches are for changing the way people think and act. 9/ Take the speech out of the room. When the CEO or an executive manager speaks about confidential company issues at a company function attended by all employees, it’s clear the most important audience is in the room. But when a CEO or an executive manager speaks about company issues that affect shareholders, customers, suppliers, prospects, current and future employees, regulators and other stakeholders, most of the effort that went into writing, rehearsing and making the speech goes to waste if the speech bounces off the walls, but doesn’t rush out the door, too. If it’s a company function but only a few employees can be present, send copies of the speech to everyone absent. Get the speech up on the web site, and put the highlights into a news release. Underline the points most important to various types of stakeholders, and mail copies to them. Include the CEOs, in addition to the day to day contacts, at your largest and your highest potential clients and customers. Give copies to your sales reps, to drop off on their rounds. Let your suppliers know how you are transforming your team. Even have copies of your speaking notes in piles by the door, so your audience can take your information with them, and share it with others.
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